Seeing as though my other one completely vanished I have to retype 1 2 and 3. -_- Fun fun. But retyping one doesn't really bother me because One was kind of lame. Anyways here we go.)
Dannie sat at the edge of the dock looking out at the ocean that glistened in the sun. A lot was on her mind but her mothers death was the main one out of everything. She sighed, remembering the good times she used to have with her mother and how her and her little sister always played along the baybayin like as their mother watched, doing a crossword puzzle in a tabing-dagat chair. Suddenly Dannie's ears twitched upon hearing someone calling her name. She turned around and saw her little sister running full speed towards her. Dannie's eyes widened as she quickly dodged Leah. She turned around and watched as she fell into the ocean. She couldn't help but laugh as Leah bobbed back up to the surface.
"That was mean Dannie! How could you reject my forceful embrace!" She growled, her big chinchilla ears drooping.
"Sorry Leah. I'm just not in a hugging mood today. I keep thinking about moms death." Dannie sighed once madami as she remembered about how one buwan nakaraan her mom drowned trying to save a baby dolpin trapped in a fishing net. She ended up getting trapped herself and drowned.
"Oh, Dannie..." Leah lifted herself back upon the dock and sat close beside her big sister. "That was over a buwan ago...I know you sad...I am to. But I'm trying to make the best of it sa pamamagitan ng having a good time. Mother would want that-"
"How could you make the best of it sa pamamagitan ng having a good time?! We're stuck here with our good for nothing dad who doesn't give to hoots about us!" Dannie cringed at the thought of her father. That black soro that made the two chinchilla sisters miserable ever since their mom passed on. "I still don't understand how mom could handle marrying that piece of trash we call our "dad"...I mean really...He's not all that sweet."
"Yes Dannie...I know..." Leah looked out at the ocean than looked back at Dannie with a grin. "Hey! Maybe Captain Natasha will give us a ride on her ship. Lets face it you need to have some fun and get your mind off things.
Dannie sat there for a bit, then considered. "Fine...I guess so."
Leah squeaked with excitement and dragged her all the way to the boardwalk were the ship was tied down. There, making sure the ship was tied down tight, was a female Shiba Inu, dressed in a pruple blouse, blue jeans, and black leather zip up boots. Her brown hair was up in a long ponytail. She looked over and saw the two girls. Leah was practically dragging her sister behind.
"What's the rush girls?" The woman sinabi with a smile.
"Hi Natasha! Can you give us a ride on your ship! Dannie needs to have some fun...." She whispered to Natasha. "She's been all moody ever since mom died."
"Aha...Well okay." Natasha smiled. "Climb aboard girls!" She grinned.
The girls got on the ship as Natasha untied the ropes. Natasha then got on the ship and pulled down the masts flag. She walked over to the steering wheel then the ship slowly started pulling away from the boardwalk.
Leah jumped as she heard Dannie shriek. She whipped her head around and realized that her sister was completely soaked with sea water. She burst out into hysterical laughter.
"HA! NOW YOU KNOW HOW I FEEL!" Leah teased.
"Satisfied?" Dannie sinabi giggling. She took off her black hoodie, a white tank tuktok being underneath. She rung out the hoodie the best she could then put it back on.
"See Dannie? All you needed was a little fun!" Leah hugged her sister and Dannie gave a small smile.
"Yeah I guess." She hugged Leah back.
Natasha scanned the waters carefully when something caught her eye. Land! She steered the bangka in the direction of the island that grew bigger as the approached.
"What are you doing Natasha?" Leah asked.
"I don't know why...but I never seen that land before. I'm gonna go check it out. But you stay on the bangka while I do. It could be dangerous."
"Alright then." Dannie said, still staring out at the sea.
Once they reached land, it hit the baybayin pretty roughly. Natasha had almost fell over but she was holding onto the steering wheel so she stayed on her feet.
"Well that's not good...." Natasha looked around the island and got of the ship. She tied it down with two thick ropes around two trees. "Remember girls, stay on the ship until I make sure it's safe!" Natasha called and started heading off.
Dannie looked at her Leah and Leah looked back at Dannie. "I hope Natasha's going to be okay..." Leah said, her ears drooping.
After about an hour, Natasha never did come back...
Dannie sat at the edge of the dock looking out at the ocean that glistened in the sun. A lot was on her mind but her mothers death was the main one out of everything. She sighed, remembering the good times she used to have with her mother and how her and her little sister always played along the baybayin like as their mother watched, doing a crossword puzzle in a tabing-dagat chair. Suddenly Dannie's ears twitched upon hearing someone calling her name. She turned around and saw her little sister running full speed towards her. Dannie's eyes widened as she quickly dodged Leah. She turned around and watched as she fell into the ocean. She couldn't help but laugh as Leah bobbed back up to the surface.
"That was mean Dannie! How could you reject my forceful embrace!" She growled, her big chinchilla ears drooping.
"Sorry Leah. I'm just not in a hugging mood today. I keep thinking about moms death." Dannie sighed once madami as she remembered about how one buwan nakaraan her mom drowned trying to save a baby dolpin trapped in a fishing net. She ended up getting trapped herself and drowned.
"Oh, Dannie..." Leah lifted herself back upon the dock and sat close beside her big sister. "That was over a buwan ago...I know you sad...I am to. But I'm trying to make the best of it sa pamamagitan ng having a good time. Mother would want that-"
"How could you make the best of it sa pamamagitan ng having a good time?! We're stuck here with our good for nothing dad who doesn't give to hoots about us!" Dannie cringed at the thought of her father. That black soro that made the two chinchilla sisters miserable ever since their mom passed on. "I still don't understand how mom could handle marrying that piece of trash we call our "dad"...I mean really...He's not all that sweet."
"Yes Dannie...I know..." Leah looked out at the ocean than looked back at Dannie with a grin. "Hey! Maybe Captain Natasha will give us a ride on her ship. Lets face it you need to have some fun and get your mind off things.
Dannie sat there for a bit, then considered. "Fine...I guess so."
Leah squeaked with excitement and dragged her all the way to the boardwalk were the ship was tied down. There, making sure the ship was tied down tight, was a female Shiba Inu, dressed in a pruple blouse, blue jeans, and black leather zip up boots. Her brown hair was up in a long ponytail. She looked over and saw the two girls. Leah was practically dragging her sister behind.
"What's the rush girls?" The woman sinabi with a smile.
"Hi Natasha! Can you give us a ride on your ship! Dannie needs to have some fun...." She whispered to Natasha. "She's been all moody ever since mom died."
"Aha...Well okay." Natasha smiled. "Climb aboard girls!" She grinned.
The girls got on the ship as Natasha untied the ropes. Natasha then got on the ship and pulled down the masts flag. She walked over to the steering wheel then the ship slowly started pulling away from the boardwalk.
Leah jumped as she heard Dannie shriek. She whipped her head around and realized that her sister was completely soaked with sea water. She burst out into hysterical laughter.
"HA! NOW YOU KNOW HOW I FEEL!" Leah teased.
"Satisfied?" Dannie sinabi giggling. She took off her black hoodie, a white tank tuktok being underneath. She rung out the hoodie the best she could then put it back on.
"See Dannie? All you needed was a little fun!" Leah hugged her sister and Dannie gave a small smile.
"Yeah I guess." She hugged Leah back.
Natasha scanned the waters carefully when something caught her eye. Land! She steered the bangka in the direction of the island that grew bigger as the approached.
"What are you doing Natasha?" Leah asked.
"I don't know why...but I never seen that land before. I'm gonna go check it out. But you stay on the bangka while I do. It could be dangerous."
"Alright then." Dannie said, still staring out at the sea.
Once they reached land, it hit the baybayin pretty roughly. Natasha had almost fell over but she was holding onto the steering wheel so she stayed on her feet.
"Well that's not good...." Natasha looked around the island and got of the ship. She tied it down with two thick ropes around two trees. "Remember girls, stay on the ship until I make sure it's safe!" Natasha called and started heading off.
Dannie looked at her Leah and Leah looked back at Dannie. "I hope Natasha's going to be okay..." Leah said, her ears drooping.
After about an hour, Natasha never did come back...
"You're misson is to recover the chaos emeralds." "ok" Ruby runs off heading towards Eggman's base."who's that" ruby thinks. As a Blue hedgehog races by. "It don't matter" As ruby sneaks into one of the vents. Crawling until the she sees the glow of the red chaos emerald. "It's like taking kendi form a baby" ruby jumps out of the vent and takes the chaos emerald. As she gets ready to leave a two tailed soro walks in. "huh, who are you" "I'm ruby, don't bother me" she jumps into the vent before tails can get her. "Get back here ruby" Ruby escapes Eggman's base and run torwds the spy HQ. "so you say a red hedgehog took the chaos emerald" says sonic "yes, she escaped before I could get her" says tails angerliy "let go after her,sonic" says cream "I'm back" "Good job, angent ruby"says Emma the HQ leader "I have a question, who's the yellow two tailed fox" ruby demands "tails the soro he travels with sonic the hedgehog" "tell me more"
I had seen so many sites, about:
Bad Sonic tagahanga Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
You can have a detailed character, if you want so.
You can have simply character, if YOU want so.
There is only one think you must remember:
Make the character's disensyo fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Bad Sonic tagahanga Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
You can have a detailed character, if you want so.
You can have simply character, if YOU want so.
There is only one think you must remember:
Make the character's disensyo fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Ok, so I know a hedgehog whose life is dark... simple this story is about that hedgehog and their long, lost, forgotten life. How the good times turn to simply bad times. And that I know their life. How do I know this? I'm not a stalker nor a watch of life. This hedgehog is me... Shadey Grey the last dark user... the last hope of the planet Dark/Light. First off, dark users are like chaos users, they use dark power or darkness control and so do chaos users... they use chaos control. I never cared for anyone... not even you. Only that I Nawawala my family... my friends... everyone I knew and loved. And I seeked revenge for them... only to find new friends. mga kaibigan that could handle my anger... I become calm for some time. Yet, I still kill people for my family and friends...for anything I can remember.
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for pagbaba this intro, tell me if I should write this or not. I start susunod week. 1/12/12)
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for pagbaba this intro, tell me if I should write this or not. I start susunod week. 1/12/12)
