is this a good TDI drawing?

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Chapter 1. Tappy.

The school taon is closing and kulay-lila has invited everyone in her tahanan room to her house for a party since no one knew each other. Everyone arrived and was having a great time and getting to know their fellow classmates. kulay-lila runs in with a hat, and paper slips.
“Okay everyone, write your names down. We’re playing 7 minutos in heave!” she demanded. After the boys put their names with in the hat, kulay-lila passed it to the first girl Tappy. She reached her hand in and read the name aloud. “Tyler?”...

*theme music plays*

Chris: welcome to total drama nxt!!!

Blainley: on the last episode Alejandro, Zoey, Gwen and Lucas won gift cards to walmart

Chris: but today is an elimination araw so

Blainley: some one is going home!!!!!

Chris: and todays challange is a mystery

Zoey: what

Breeze: ugh

Sierra: which means its totally obvious

Chris: Sierra I sinabi you cant talk ever

Sierra: *thinks* he is still mad at me

Duncan: just tell us McLoser

DJ: yeah

Blainley: fine its going to be rookie vs pro today

Lucas: what

Chris: in the classic challenge STAY IN THE PLAT FORM!!!!

Cody: ugh not this game again

Gwen: it wasnt fun...