Yet another fanfic about a ipakita I never had the chance to watch. Now, from what I know, this fanfic is based off of the hit anime, Sailor Moon... A ipakita in which I never got around to watching because I'm an idiot that never looks at popular stuff. Anyway, this fanfic here, named Rini's Horrible Death, is a huge piece of shit that I'm surprised I actually got through it without wanting to find the actul sorce for this fanfic and burn every bit of it. Lets begin, shall we?
So, the whole fanfic is about a character from the ipakita named Serena is getting fed up with Rini always getting in the way of her pag-ibig life. Now, a smart writer would us this to ipakita some development. But, the may-akda felt this was better. How does Serena decide to solve this easily solveable with a talk problem? sa pamamagitan ng killing Rini of course, its prety much Bad Fanfiction 101 to have at least one death in a fanfic for no goddamn reason. Also, I'd like to point out that Rini is supposed to be Serena's future daughter, so Serena is actually killing her daughter... and I didn't look that up. That's what it says in the fanfic itself. Wow... And this was good writing, how?
Anyway, they go to some cave... Which can just be found anywhere in Hapon and so, Serena knocks out Rini and has her chained to a table....... The may-akda isn't doing what I think he/she is doing, right... Tell me there not stealing scenes from Cupcakes. Why the fuck are they stealing scenes form Cupcakes? Why? Okay, so we got stupid situations, idiotic characters, and now ripping off fanfics that are better then this. Goddamn it. Also, I would like to point out again that Serena calls Rini a bitch... Um... I believe you are mistaken, Serena. A asong babae is not some one who accidently ruins your dates, and would 100% apologize if you pointed this out. No, Serena, a asong babae is someone who thinks killing is the answer to all your problems... You fucking bitch.
Anyway, we get a torture scene (Stop ripping off Cupcakes already. You will never be as good) Where Serena cuts off Rini's fingers and then cuts out her heart. Finally, we get to the end where... Appereantly, Serena tells everyone that Rini left to her own world... And, everyone is stupid enough to believe this... That's all I got. Rini's Horrible Death, rot in hell. I would say that Serena is the worst fanfic character ever... But, trust me, there is one worse. But, thats a different review.
In other words, This fanfiction REALLY sucks. The plot sucks, the characters sucks, and it even rips off good fanfics. My gos, that's like a Gears of War fanfiction ripping off scenes from My Little Dashie. In other words, this fanfic sucks. But, hay, that's only my opinion. What's Your Take