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posted by para-scence
The susunod day, after Nikolai and Carmine went to work, I waited until school would've been out to go find Andrew. I waited sa pamamagitan ng the side of the high school, until the students started filing out. I kept my eyes open for him, but when I didn't see him for a long time, I began to worry that he hadn't shown up to school at all today. My puso skipped a beat when I saw him, and I realized I didn't have a plan.

I hid on the side of the school, until he walked past, not even noticing me. Then I grabbed the back of his shirt, and pulled him back into the alley, forcing him up against the wall.

"Ow! What the fuck, man?!" he shouted, not knowing who it was. I flipped him around so he was facing me. He looked surprised, but that was quickly replaced sa pamamagitan ng anger. "What do you want?"

"Who killed Dalton," I said. I guess I didn't think this through. I had meant to ask him why he killed Dalton.

"Your brother. Reed," he seethed.

"No he didn't!" I shouted, angry that everyone thought that. Andrew scoffed.

"Yeah, right. Then who did?" he asked. I clenched my teeth. The tone of his voice sounded like he was taunting me.

"You did!" I shouted. He was speechless for a moment. Then he laughed, and it echoed off into the sky. Anger boiled through me, and before I knew what I was doing, I had the gun placed up against Andrew's temple. He stopped laughing at once, and his eyes widened.

"Please.... Please don't..." he said. He sounded like he was going to cry. If the adrenaline pumping through hadn't made it impossible to feel anything, I probably would've laughed my head off. I put my finger on the trigger. "Harley. Please. I swear, I didn't do it."

"Neither did Reed!" I shouted hysterically. I felt like I'd go mad if one madami person told me Reed was the murderer.

"Ok! Ok! I believe you!" he said, his hands in the air; surrender. I took a deep breath, my hand shaking. "Please..." he sinabi again. I squeezed my eyes shut, then put my gun back in my pocket. He breathed a sigh of relief.

"Then who did," I sinabi through my teeth.

"I don't know! Don't you think I'd like to know that too?" he asked. I folded my arms. "So... Was I the first suspect?" he asked. I shook my head.

"I checked Rafael, Franky, Armando, and basically every other leader in town." Andrew nodded, thinking.

"And why'd you think of me?" he asked. He sounded hurt.

"Because... Sometimes you seem jealous of Dalton... I just thought..."

"I loved my brother. I respected him. I would never kill him," Andrew said. He was telling the truth. The way he spoke of Dalton, he seemed so... mesmerized and enchanted. There was no way he could be lying.

"Fine. Whatever... I'm sorry about your brother. I'm going to find who killed him," I promised. I turned to leave, but he put his hand on my shoulder and stopped me.

"Harley? Uh... If you get any clues or ideas... would you let me know? I'd like to bust Dalton's murderer too." I nodded.

"Yeah. Sure."

"And... Ah, who knows, wanna hang out sometime?" he asked. I looked him over. It was Andrew.... My mortal enemy, one of the main reasons I started carrying a gun, the guy that made my insides burn with hate... But it didn't seem like Andrew.

"Uh... sure...?" I said, not so sure. I turned and left, still very much confused. I went home; had to get there before Nikolai and Carmine.

Carmine got home, only ten minutos after I did. I hadn't spoken to him since yesterday, when he had lashed out at me. The air became dense when he entered, and you could almost see the awkward. I made him a sandwhich, what he always eats after a long araw of work. He sat down and ate without a word. I sat on the couch, not bothering to turn on the TV. I just sat there, and thought about who possibly would have killed Dalton.

"You left," Carmine said. My head snapped in his direction.

"What?"

"You weren't supposed to leave the house." How the hell did he know I left?! He nodded over to the door. "Your shoes are muddy." Dammit.

"Uh..." I began.

"Why'd you leave?!" he shouted. He stood up fast, knocking the chair out from under him. I winced at the loud clatter.

"I... I was just... looking for who---" I jumped up from the sopa as Carmine advanced towards me. I backed away, guarding myself.

"You weren't supposed to leave! Why can't you just do what you're told?! You could've gotten hurt! You could be like Dalton and end up dead!" he shouted. I put one hand on the arm of the couch, to help push myself ahead if I needed to run. I had one arm out in front of me, to push him away if I couldn't get away.

"Carmine. Please. Stop," I tried to say calmly. He'd never acted like this before. It was terrifying. Nikolai always sinabi Carmine's the soft and sensitive one. He's obviously never seen him like this. He was about as calm as a rodeo bull. He took another giant step towards me, and I bolted for the door. I didn't make it, and he grabbed the tops of my arms and shook me.

"Don't ever disobey us again! Do you hear me?!" he screamed. Tears filled my eyes, and I nodded, trying to keep back screams. He stared deep into my eyes, then all at once, he seemed to break. He loosened his grip on my arms and wrapped them around my entire body, pulling me into a hug. He sobbed, his tears splashing into my hair. I was shocked for a moment, then rubbed soothing circles on his back.

"It's ok... It's going to be alright," I sinabi softly. I'd never had to comfort Carmine before; or any of my brothers actually. We stood there awkwardly in the living room, me hugging him while he bent over me and cried. Nikolai walked in, and stopped. He looked to me, his eyes questioning. I shook my head and mouthed "later," and continued to soothe Carmine.

"I pag-ibig you Harley," he sobbed. "Please. Don't do that again. I don't wanna lose you too." I nodded understandingly.

"I pag-ibig you too. I won't. Promise."
posted by amethyst44
I was born, yet I felt as though I lived before.

I breathed, though I struggled for the air that would keep me sane.

I ate pagkain and drink, but I still craved for more.

I slept, but I was still awake and pulsing with energy inside.

I made my first friend, but I knew I would have to say goodbye sometime.

I felt fear, even though my head was streaming with it already beforehand.

I felt joy, yet my body ached of pain and sorrow.

I wept, but my tears tasted of sweet wine instead of seasalt.

I ran through the light of the morning sun, though my spirit raced into the wild night.

I dreamed of bayani and happiness, knowing however that it was an illusion upon waking up.

I looked into eyes of beauty, only to see them wash away the susunod day.

I fell weak and frail, but my spirit strengthened the loss.

I reached for hands of help, only to have them drag me down.

I closed my eyes, to see the light.

...to thus being born again...
posted by Pirate_4_life
Chapter one

Her mind replayed the images. The dark eyes staring into hers, his hair hanging over his forehead. The soft curve of his mouth as he whispered the inaudible words. The same guy that had filled her dreams for the last week and a half. Her thoughts completely focused on trying to figure out what those words were, and madami importantly who he was. Usually she could always place a name with a face yet here she drew a complete blank. Maybe, she decided, he doesn’t even exist. It was only a dream after all. A figment of her imagination created to distract her from the far from exciting...
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posted by juicyjossy9
1. Practice kindness and gratitude with everyone, including yourself, everywhere and every day, it's great for the soul!
2. The most important sex organ is the brain.
3. Life is too short to waste time hating anyone.
4. Don't take yourself so seriously. No one else does.
5. We all have been born. We all have to die. What's in between is up to us to create.
6. You don't have to win every argument. Agree to disagree.
7. Cry with someone. It's madami healing than crying alone.
8. Stop listening to the words you've heard, no one but yourself will agree with you more.
9. Save for retirement starting...
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posted by kayleebabee
umm uy guys sorry i have not posted anything in so long I got major Pagsulat block and had to wait untill all of my expertise came back to me.

I seek a release
from the pain that I feel
Inside my puso there is only
Anger, betrayal and sadness!

Lonliness is a terrible thing
with no-one to see the state that Im in
my head is spinning think im gonna be sick
oh please god
send me someone I can relate to

I cant trust my mum shes to far gone
cant trust my dad hes just an asno
If i cant trust my family who can i trust?

Inside my chest is a hole
where my puso once was
My mum cruelly tore it out
and then stamped all over it!
I was only a child
burdened with adult responsibilities!

and inside that hole
If you can see past all of the scars
you will see my suppresed heart!
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chapter four
music says it all

we were running late the araw after it had been a great night and sa pamamagitan ng the smile on becs face she enjoyed it too. she tol me last night how tom had asked her out and always liked her but not know what to say.
it was weird in a way talking to becca it was like i knew her, like i knew her from some place but not knowing where.
"hey what do you have first?" i couldn't help asking i wanted to know if she would be in my music and i missed her or something
"ermm... art first you?"
"music" she must have heard the exsitment in my voice cause she gave me a queastion mak face....
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posted by HaleyDewit
We're blind to another one's pain
'Cause we refuse to see
We're deaf to another one's cries
'Cause we refuse to hear
We're dumb to another one's comfort request
'Cause we refuse to speak

But our eyes are wide open
To see another one's mistake
Our ears are open
To hear abouth another one's mistakes
And we can speak
To judge about another one's mistakes

We think we know everything
But we don't know anything
We're ready to judge
But we'd better look in the mirror

Making mistakes is proof your human
Turning your back on those who make them, not so much

He who's without sin,cast the first stone
What hast thou done unto my heart?
Unto my soul what hast become?
When I met thee at the very start,
I knew I could not tell my mum.

Thy language foul, it bothered me,
But I saw through thy ettiquit.
I had seen thine sincerity.
Our conversations my araw lit.

What hast thou done unto my heart?
Unto my soul what hast become?
When I met thee at the very start,
I knew I could not tell my mum.

For hours we would sit and talk.
Secretly I admired thee.
My pain I let thee block.
I wanted to know if thou didst too pag-ibig me.

What hast thou done unto my heart?
Unto my soul what hast become?
When I met thee...
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posted by inexplicable
I would never have thought that I would ever be here again.
But it still had come to that anyway. I was in the first floor of my old school which I have attended four years nakaraan again. It was still the same. Only the doors were painted newly the corridor, the walls. I heard noises from the gymnasium. I circulated to the third floor to look whether the theater group listed there today. I passed sa pamamagitan ng the keep fit room, where I still had had lessons four years nakaraan once and I had got back the feeling for a short moment to be I myself. How it still have been me four years nakaraan and HE was the only one...
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Writers use sentence fragments for emphasis and other stylistic reasons, but over using incomplete sentences confuses the reader. You also should avoid incomplete sentences in academic or professional writing. The three major components of a complete sentence are a subject, verb and complete idea

Check for Grammatical Completeness



The two basic components of a complete sentence are a subject and a verb. Although these two things don't always make a complete sentence, grammatical completeness is a good place to start to avoid incomplete sentences. The verb is the action that takes place, and...
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posted by Me_Iz_Here
Depressing, COMPLETELY FICTIONAL story I wrote.

“My mother ruined my life.” You hear girls say that all the time. It’s never true. Unless you ask me. My mother truly ruined my life. Not in the way you would expect a sixteen taon old girl to say that. I genuinely meant it.
I remember sobbing that day. When we got back from the doctor, sobbing my eyes out. I hated her. I hated my mother with a passion.
I looked down at my newly flat stomach. I missed the bump there. The bump that I had indicating an unborn child. The child that I loved and vowed to care for. Until my fucking mother made...
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There’s this chick called Princess Alyssia Renesmee III (Alyss). She’s the princess (obviously :). At the start she has a best friend who she’s been mga kaibigan with since they were mga sanggol called Charlotte. She ended up being her maidservant though coz her parents were killed. Alyss lives in the kastilyo with her parents the king and reyna (obviously) and boyfriend/ fiancé, James. He keeps knicken off on ‘business’. Alyss doesn’t actually suspect anything, she’s just sad that she never gets to see him. She’s also known him since they were really little, and she’s supposed to marry...
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posted by London_Victoria
 Now i Will Always Remember You<3
Now i Will Always Remember You<3
Hurtful word's can mean so much but nothing means madami than to hear your beautiful word's.
Because when you cry i will too because noone
knows how much i pag-ibig you only me and my heart
do,And it tells me that i would die for you.
When you say i cant take it anymore it surprises me that you mean it because i think it's
beautiful that you would give your puso to me.
People might say i'm wrong for you but their words dont matter because me and you are different from everyone else.
I know sometimes im not always there for you but i will try my best to tell you the truth because nothing really matters...
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