this is an English sonnet I had to write for my English class and I need to know if it is good or not before I ibigay it, thank you. also the rhyme scheme is ababcdcdefefgg
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My dear pag-ibig you once were a shining ray.
In my eyes you meant the whole world to me.
Now everything about you is a shade of gray.
Like your beauty, your emotions, and your pag-ibig is what I see.
However we must part onto our new paths.
Because our pag-ibig is coming to its new close.
mga kulay were a beauty but now gray spreads its wrath.
I would pag-ibig to feel again but now it’s a ghost.
Our pag-ibig has left this earth for old times’ sake.
But when our pag-ibig left it took you along too.
Sadly it left me with all this heartache.
Dying pag-ibig was something I wish I had clues to
If someone told me pag-ibig would never be easy
I would have chosen another path that’s breezy
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My dear pag-ibig you once were a shining ray.
In my eyes you meant the whole world to me.
Now everything about you is a shade of gray.
Like your beauty, your emotions, and your pag-ibig is what I see.
However we must part onto our new paths.
Because our pag-ibig is coming to its new close.
mga kulay were a beauty but now gray spreads its wrath.
I would pag-ibig to feel again but now it’s a ghost.
Our pag-ibig has left this earth for old times’ sake.
But when our pag-ibig left it took you along too.
Sadly it left me with all this heartache.
Dying pag-ibig was something I wish I had clues to
If someone told me pag-ibig would never be easy
I would have chosen another path that’s breezy
We decided to camp out sa pamamagitan ng a near forest with a small waterfall sa pamamagitan ng it. My burnt hair from the apoy was irritating me so I decided to wash my hair in the waterfall. The water was cold, but I didn't care. Bruno felt my hair. I smiled warmly. I sinabi like I wasn't a helper " So, where are your parents?' He sinabi " Well, after I was born, a witch estola my mother, killed her, and I have no dad. So I'm an orphan" I thought ' I wish he could tell, he wouldn't have to do this, he wouldn't have to tell me bad mermories.' " I pag-ibig you." sinabi Bruno. " I pag-ibig a person for a person." 'Well, I'm not a person. Im a helper! Why can't you tell? Im a helper! I pag-ibig a person for a person too! But you're not a person! But I pag-ibig you!'Bruno sinabi he would go out to the forest to get get some food. After my hair was washed, I sat down. Why can't he tell I'm a helper? But then, I heard a scream in the woods. I could tell who it was.... Bruno.
this is a heads-up on a story im writing. its about this kid in highschool wh ogoes into this haunted house,then,she turns into a vampire,slowy,and people begin to notice. its awesome.
heres the charecters.
vanessa:vampire girl.
duncan:vampiers girls brother
kylie:vamps bfff.
susan:mean girl
katie:posse (mean girl)
ashle:same as katie
mom:vamps mom
dad:vamps dad
um:those are the main charecters. details i havent thought of yet.ok,so,now you know.ok,bye!
gotta type more,you cn leave now.
jfgfgddfddfffff Bampira rule!
heres the charecters.
vanessa:vampire girl.
duncan:vampiers girls brother
kylie:vamps bfff.
susan:mean girl
katie:posse (mean girl)
ashle:same as katie
mom:vamps mom
dad:vamps dad
um:those are the main charecters. details i havent thought of yet.ok,so,now you know.ok,bye!
gotta type more,you cn leave now.
jfgfgddfddfffff Bampira rule!