this is an English sonnet I had to write for my English class and I need to know if it is good or not before I ibigay it, thank you. also the rhyme scheme is ababcdcdefefgg
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My dear pag-ibig you once were a shining ray.
In my eyes you meant the whole world to me.
Now everything about you is a shade of gray.
Like your beauty, your emotions, and your pag-ibig is what I see.
However we must part onto our new paths.
Because our pag-ibig is coming to its new close.
mga kulay were a beauty but now gray spreads its wrath.
I would pag-ibig to feel again but now it’s a ghost.
Our pag-ibig has left this earth for old times’ sake.
But when our pag-ibig left it took you along too.
Sadly it left me with all this heartache.
Dying pag-ibig was something I wish I had clues to
If someone told me pag-ibig would never be easy
I would have chosen another path that’s breezy