Pagsulat Article: ok, here goes nothing... please comment

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posted by annalia

here are some poems/songs i wrote recently. hope u like them.

here i am now, missing you,
i need to let go now and know the truth
it wasn't right, that pag-ibig i had for you,

you didn't know,
i couldn't tell,
too shy to say, 'i pag-ibig you',
i slipped by, so alone,wondering if you thought of me, too
but now i'm gonna let go,

see the sun rise,
watch a baby play,
sing a song and
go dancing in the rain

all without a single thought of you,
i'm gonna let go and enjoy myself
without you there at all,

i'm gonna learn someday that happiness
is not defined with your name
so you can ilipat on now,
i'm forgeting us,
let's both go on now

and i'm trying
to forget us
but your memories won't letgo of my heart
let me go
i must go on
have to live in your absence
even though
you're my life and breath
everthing i am
i've got to let go
i gotta forget
'cause i wanna

see the sun rise,
watch a baby play,
sing a song and go
dancin' in the rain
without you there,
without you ther,
i've gotta let go

it's hard
moving on
when we did so much together
you've still got
a piece of me
give it back now!
my heart's mine,
and no one else
has ever walked right in
the way you did
no one's ever been quite like you!
but someday,
someone will come
he'll sweep me
off my feet
but 'till then,
i can't forget
the sound of your voice in my head!

i hope none of these sound too cliche-d.
enjoy.

irena83 and writer67 like this

writer67 its good,hope youve been to the beach and had a swim even if its freezn,or walked in the rain,you think to much, you one heck of a catch, someone going to bee happy. time to remember you count,and up up and away, back into life,your still on the nice list, smile be happy,your poems done,now time for the song, merry xmas, peace be with you

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The shadowed walk

posted by Free_Spirit

Me: okay this is a short story i came up with. I know its a little bit drepressing but i was in a really bad mood. PLEASE TELL Me WHAT YOU THINK. Sorry i pu that in sombrero cause people will notice it better. Okay enjoy

I start as the rain begins to fall. Great i thought darkly. I didn't like the rain, i always thought it emphasised how bad this world really is. I waited impatiently for class to end. The class was playing putbol and the other kids seemed to pag-ibig the rain while playing. I didn't sumali in, i wasn't apart of that group.

I sighed in relief when i heard the kampanilya signal the end of class....

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Fight to Freedom Chapter 3: Searching for a ghost.

posted by ganondorfslayer

Please read the other chapters and tell me whether this is any good or not. And if you don't like it, please give constructive critisicm.

The last of the hapunan guests poured out of Joseph Warren's house. He didn't have hapunan parties often because they usually resulted in fight's between two different people or parties with extremely different political views. Fortunately, their was only one, small conflict on whether America should be fighting communism in other coutries or not. Joeseph of course took the side of fighting communism, and so did a couple of others. But most of the other people...

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black moon chap 11

posted by joe-edwardfan

Chapter 11
I pulled away and showed matt where I was looking it was a brown lobo staring at us I bet he was stairing the whole time we were there the lobo had intelligent eyes like human then it disappeared and jake came out of the same spot with his bare chest
-jake?
-Bella what are you doing here? Didn’t you say you were living?
He sinabi coldly
-you talk like this is your land! I was born here you cant say were I should go!
-I can Bella I don’t want to kill you!
I laughed kill me! Pfffff
-you cant kill us!
Matt sinabi angry
-jake what do you want you don’t have powers…………and how did you...

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communism is a fire, chapter 1: employed sa pamamagitan ng liberty

posted by ganondorfslayer

The guards walked back and forth in their normal sweeping motion that they always used. This made Joseph smile watching them through his hotel window with his state-of-the-art night-vision binoculars. just routine as usual, at least that's what the guards thought. Joseph looked at his watch, 12:23a.m. only seven madami minutos till he had to go. Joseph grabbed his bag of ammunition and various other things. His small, light smg. He also put on his body armor, his cammo, and grabbed his combat knife. And of course his baby, he'd never forget his baby. His baby was a 9.mm beretta. Aims like a dream...

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black moon chapter 9

posted by joe-edwardfan

(end of chapter8)
I was so nerves how charlie was going to react, matt squeezed my hand to comfort me charlie opened the door and gasped he was stairing at me ,not beliving it was me
-Bella?
He wasn’t sure if it was really me and then I heard billys voice from the phone
-charlie charlie are you ok?
He didn’t respond and turned off the phone
-yeah dad its me
He staired at me again
-you look different!
-yeah two weeks does that to you.
I lied to him
-oh Bella! I missed you so much I was so worried that I wouldn’t see you again!
Then I took my hand out of matts and hugged him
-your cold
-yeah its freezing...

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Different Worlds - Chapter 4

posted by Bella_Swan3

"My world is devoid of hope. It's a world where all I hear is the sound of outside voices and the screams of those I kill. Where all I see is the black surface of an ocean reflecting a moon that is always a crescent, and the scarlet river that tears me in two, the river filled with the blood I have spilled. The river may not be real, but at some point, reality and imagination merge together, so you can no longer discern them from one another. At some point, it just won't matter anymore," Taylor whispered, resting her forehead against the spotted mirror that hung in her room.

How strange that...

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The Alien Thorn <introduction>

posted by dancing_banana

I see everything very clear and I can sense things others cant. My family sees at a great gift sent to me from the senses spirit while I see it as a curse.

For centuries we lived susunod to earth closer to it then the moon living in peace with the humans until they saw us as a threat and started a war against us, at first we fought back but the humans refused to give up their battle. Our kind used to be very peaceful and most of us retreated to Jupiter. But not everyone, a little less then half of our ancestors stayed including my great great grandfather he stayed because he saw it as a right....

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High Skool Rainbows:chapter 1- part two

posted by summerfrog

Skiro
As I walked in I noticed everyone knew someone. I also noticed everyone was wearing uniforms-blue or white shirts and kaky pants. I stood out much madami than I wanted to. Though I wanted people to see me, and now a lot did, so I smiled and looked for a place to sit. I saw a group of girls, a group of hot guys,a lot of black-wearing people,and some others that I didn't care to know.
Then there was a mesa that was mostly empty except for one very cute boy. as I walked toward him I saw madami of his features: he was pale-I wondered why-,skinny and muscular-did he play a sport?-,and light blond...

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High Skool Rainbows:chapter 1- part one

posted by summerfrog

Chapter 1: First araw of school
Skiro
I woke up to my mom's voice saying “get up, Its your first araw of school!”,as she woke me up from a nice dream. I opened my eyes and then waited for for my mom to leave the room. Then I got up in the room that was still new to me. I had only been in Spanish Fort a week so everything still looked strange. Reaching into my suitcase,I got out a kulay-rosas T-shirt and jean shorts. After putting them on I went into the bathroom,peed,and then looked at myself in the full-length mirror. I smiled at the nice tan I got from going to the tabing-dagat earlier that week. Seeing...

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Wanting Someone - Chapter Nineteen

posted by Lindy52

Chapter Nineteen

Seeing Sean Connors there with a bottle of wine inside the bag he’s carrying, Jamie was about to closed the door and headed up the stairs to sleep but she didn’t. Instead of doing that, Jamie stared at Sean’s eyes and with a questionable tone in her voice and a thin line on her face that resembled her smile, she asked him, “Sean, what are you doing here?”

Holding the heavy canvas bag in his hand and holding it up to the brunette woman while saying to her, “Hi, Jamie and well, I went over to the liquor store on the way tahanan to get myself a six-pack of serbesa because...

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Proper Blood

posted by genyva

New Smells

The smell. There was nothing like it the first araw at school. I looked to my brother. This was our first school taon in Maine. The weather was crappy all the time but it was worth it I am not really a night person. Whose to say I have to do everything like my parents. This is the new millennium not 15 hundreds.

My family is different. Other then the fact that we have lived for hundreds of years, we are also vampire. 40 years ago, the human world found out about our world. Slowly rights were made to fit our needs, and schools were open for the young and unadvised. Humans could fall...

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Bloody Black Rose part 1

posted by Ninano1998

Fire, every were ,no escape,so many dead, another
nightmare...
"Liana,Liana wake up!" I opened my eyes ,and groaned. Mami stood over me. "Come on sleep slough" she sinabi "or you will be late for P.C.S" P.C.S is my school . It stands for power control school. I sighed and got up. Still sleepy, I brushed my teeth and got dressed. I grabbed a saging and ran out the door.Outside sat Hikaru." What took you so long?" he asked." Sleep.""Ha ha ha!" he laughed. Hikaru is my best friend. He has beautiful green hair with two long stripes of yellow and has big brown eyes that always sparkle.Nothing like my...

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Broken Dreams Chapter 23

posted by BellaSwan636

Serena

Ashleigh was a little three taon old, and I could see she'd be really pretty when she was older.

I wasn't sure how how, but becoming a mother just let me see clearly. About so many things. What was important and what wasn't worth it.

**************************************************

I'd picked her up from the daycare and took her to the playground, where we were supposed to meet Jamie, the little girl who was Ashleigh's best friend, and her mother, Jenna. Jenna was a single mother, like myself, but two years older. We'd become best mga kaibigan as our children had.

It was Friday, and Jamie...

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Elipse

posted by ihavOTD

I breathed in and out slowly. This was horrid. Running. I spat at the word. I despised running.

Joseph jogged up to me. "You okay Kristen?"
"Yeah, just give me a minute."
"Hah! You always end up like this. Maybe you should quit track?"
"You know I can't! If I do, then I have to do Trigonometry. Ugh. That's worse."
"Right..."
I stood up and we walked in silence. His lithe step did not match mine. I had a clumsy, trip over step. I needed somebody to teach me how to walk right.
"Oof." I had tripped, and landed on my side. How? I have no idea. Normal people land on their face or back. Not me!

Please e-mail me or comment. Tell me if you like this segment or not, if I get enought votes, I will continue my writing.

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Goodnight and Goodbye - A Frasier tagahanga Fiction

posted by Lie_to_Me_123

Goodnight and Goodbye

He shut the door silently behind him, but not enough for her to hear his fragile puso breaking.

When he re-entered the hotel room from the balcony, a sea of faces greeted him. "Do you wanna drink?" Simon gargled, as soon as he saw Niles' worn face.

He embarked to his room, without another word to Simon or any other members of Daphnes family. As soon as he stepped through the frame, he saw Mel in bed, waiting for him. She put down the book she was reading, on the side mesa and elegantly unblanketed herself from under the covers.
She embraced him and a warm smile spread...

prebiyu waverly hills: one night of hell. story from the scapel number one

posted by delta117

i was a normal 18 taon old colledge student until that night that horid night the night that all saftyein my life died it was a cold winters night and me and my friend trent were going to stay the night at the most haunted hospital in the world ( madami like most haunted place of death and despair)waverly hlls sanitoryoum. "come on tristen were going to be laughing stocks of the city if we dont go" "trent." i sinabi " i dont think we should go" " are u chicening out." he sinabi " no" i snapped " but its not right" i argued to him "its these millions of death beads and u have famly that died there and so do i" " he looked mad at me mentioning his uncle who died there but i had to make him stop. "no" he sinabi " we are going." to hell i thought if only i new

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A Skating Adventure To Remember

posted by Katiegirl

The snow is falling on this cold blistery afternoon.
Just up ahead, in the clearing I could see a young woman gloriously and delicately skating. Skating, as if she had skated her entire life.
Suddenly, I began remembering an adventure that seemed so many moons ago.
Beyond the horizon I could see myself walking briskly toward the solid, cold ice that kept me nagyelo in silence.
I could hear the ice crackling, like papkorn being popped, beneath my shaking feet.
As I adventured onto to the ice, I felt a cold chill creep up my back that seemingly felt like a warning sign to...

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Gods 2: Chapter 3: A stolen halik

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

He smirked. “Hello Sadie” he sang, I closed my eyes and then opened them again, hoping I was going blind. I heard footsteps behind me and then a loud scoff. “What’re you doing here?” Ethan asked, I opened my mouth to answer for Adam but was interrupted. “I came here to see Sadie” he said, I sighed. Ethan looked to me and gave me a look, one I noticed he used to give to me when we were kids and I had stolen his toy. “Is this true did you ask him to come?” Ethan asked me, I shrugged. “I don’t think so” I told him, I heard Adam laugh. “I’m so glad this amuses you!”...

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The Vampire Reporter -- Chapter 1

posted by BiteMeCullen107

I’m finally on my own, alone. I just turned eighteen a couple of months nakaraan and I got a job offer in Los Angeles California. I’ve been Pagsulat since I could write and when I reached junior high I joined the new paper and I did the same in high school and in my segundo taon of high school I was offered a job as a reported for the Salem New Hampshire news paper and I accepted. My job threw the years had grown and now that I’m done high school I can take the job offer.
Ya my parents were pissed when the found out I wasn’t going to collage but if you think about it...

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Chapter 3 of Trapped in my own Time

posted by dragonrider

"Okay Starr your message has been put through. The council and your parents will get it in time when you get back," Whitney says on the phone.
I sigh in relief "That's good. Thanks whitney. sa pamamagitan ng the way how do you like your new job? Councilman and messenger!" I gush
Whitney has been my friend since forever when we both finished college eight months nakaraan we both got different jobs. I work as a time traveller recording things from the past.
"It's great Starr! I get paid a lot. How bout you?" she asks
"Well going back is great but some of the people back then are annoying. Well I got to get to...