Mistakes Writers Make With Genre - Brooks Elms

My wide brown eyes glanced around the Bridgewell high school lunchbox and all I saw was the same thing as everyday. The "cool" group, my group, all sitting in the same spot. The middle of the lunchbox, drawing all attention on us with our screaming and giggling. It would usually be me starting the scenes but now I see differently. What’s the point with all the makeup, the new outfit each araw and the teasing of the smart kids. I don't want to be this girl anymore, I hate her.
Just at that moment Catherine and Amanda walk past. The smart kids, the ones who care what grades they get and now...

So for all you Mahomies here is a bunch of stuff about Austin Mahone!!
Full Name - Austin Carter Mahone
Birthday - April 4th 1996
Hair color - Brown
Height - 5'8
Eye color - Hazel
Hand he writes with - Right
Pets - 2 Pusa , Romo and Anthony , and his dog Angel who died in April 2012
Favorite color- Red
Talents - basketbol , Drums , gitara , Piano , Singing
Born in - San Antonio TX
Favorite kendi - Hershey Kisses and Skittles
Favorite Song - One Less Lonely Girl - JB
Mom - Michele
Dad - Carter ( Died when Austin was 16 months) :(
Best friend - Alex Constancio
Hat size - 7 1/2
Favorite sports team - Spurs
Favorite...

I know the Columbine Massacre anniversary was Friday, so I decided to put up a story I wrote about it. I wrote this a couple months nakaraan from the viewpoint of Craig Scott. Please comment and let me know what you think.

“Craig! Get up! We’re going to be late!“ My sister Rachel pounded her fist on my door. I reluctantly opened my eyes to look at the clock. I had only ten minutos to get ready. I cursed under my breath and got dressed quickly, not bothering to grab anything to eat. I got to Rachel’s car just before she was about to ditch me. I tried to catch up on my algebra homework on the...

****Thanks for the comments. I own all rights to this story****
Chapter 2
Friends and school
I woke up real early susunod morning. Dreading the araw ahead of me. Noel drove us to school on the way to work. We memorized our classes the araw before. Just wanted to keep you awake.But the school was pretty nice. It occupied a long acre of damo and trees. So on a hot araw the trees will shade us from the heat.
The office was the main building a bit larger than the cafeteria and the first first building you'll see.
You'd keep walking straight to glass double doors that lead outside to lush green damo and...

Chapter 1

At the beginning of time, there was nothing. A void existed, one that covered the whole of the earth. Without warning, a tear was made in that void, and through it came a ship, an ark from a distant world. With it came the Creator, who had watched and guided the ship from the dead place it had been made. When he saw the new expanse around him, he formed an idea in his head, and from it shaped the new earth in the form of the old world. That world complete, he gently laid the ship on the new land, and brought forth its passengers, the children of men that had lived and died in the...