Penguins of Madagascar Article: Tortured...chapter 5

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posted by spmana123

I was awaiting his decision I had wanted to make to save my two mga kaibigan and get then out of this hell hole, and make them not suffer anymore, but then blowhole had that grin on that face that made me cringe, I knew what was about to happen.

Blowhole:actually I have a better idea, and idea that I like a whole lot better...minion, go get my paborito weapon.

The minion then smiled at all of us, that terrible grin on. There faces were bothering me, god, why can't they leave us alone, haven't we suffered enough. The minion stopped smiling and ran out of the room to go get this "special weapon"

Blowhole: well, I didn't like your plan skipper, but you'll pag-ibig me for this susunod idea up my fin.

Skipper:......

Blowhole: what, got nothing to say.. You will in a minute.

I had nothing to say to this bastard...he was a cold hearted monster, who just wants to do this for the fun of it...was killing my friend FUN to him, was choking Kowalski fun, or beating private with a bat FUN, no... He was going crazy. The minion then came running back in, with a suitcase? He proceeded to pull out a needle with something inside of it.

Blowhole: this, my fellow penguins, is a needle containing my very own substance that can kill anyone when injected in 5 minutes! But... I only have one, so who to use it on?

He then began to look at all of us, one sa pamamagitan ng one he was studying us, that son of a bitch...I wasn't going to let another one of my comrades die!!

Skipper: take me you monster, don't you touch them!!

Blowhole looked at me as if he didn't want to hurt me, maybe he was saving me for last, that's probably why I haven't gotten hurt yet...

Blowhole: I know who I'm picking!

He then began to laugh uncontrollably, then whispered into his minions ear. Who was it?!

The minion grabbed the needle and walked over to Kowalski slowly.. Kowalski then began to cry uncontrollably out of nowhere, screaming them to stop, and why they were doing this to us, why they were laughing it up.

Kowalski: PLEASE!! I'LL DO ANYTHING JUST DON'T KILL ME, PlEASE!!!

Skipper: DON'T HURT HIM, UGAHHH!!!!

I tried to get out of these ropes... But they were so damn tight..I couldn't get out of them, I began to feel blood come down my arms, I didn't even realize I was bleeding from all the for e I was putting on this rope.private couldn't even look anymore, all I could hear from him was crying.

Blowhole: any last words Kowalski.

Kowalski: (sobs) please....don't do this (sobs), I'm sorry for whatever I've done to you, just don't kill me!

Kowalski began to struggle to get out of his chair, but the rope was to strong on him as we'll, all he could do was accept what was about to happen to him,

Blowhole: alright, inject him!

The minion Kowalski's good arm and injected the needle in him.

Skipper:NOOOO!!! YOU BASTARD!!! I'LL KILL YOU!!

Blowhole: alright, come minion, well wait till he dies, then well deal with the other two...

And with that they left and waited for Kowalski to die from the shot they gave him, all I could do was look at Kowalski the entire time, thinking that they tricked us, and this was all a sick joke... But I could even tell that Kowalski was dying..

Kowalski: skipper.....I'm not doing good...am I.... Gonna die...?(cough,cough!)

I began to bawl in tears when he sinabi that, I didn't know what to say to him, we only had a few minutos together before he died, all I could do was cry, just like Rico... I'll never see Kowalski ever again, I'll never hear his ideas about how to get closer to Dorris, or make some of his inventions that no one ever thought of but him...

Skipper: Kowalski (crying), I pag-ibig you man....I pag-ibig you.

Thats all i could say to him,I didn't want to tell him he was going to die, I just wanted to talk to him.

Kowalski: I (cough,cough) pag-ibig you too skipper.....and I pag-ibig private too..... I know....you two....will make it out of here......make sure.....to murder blowhole for me......(cough,cough)

Private: no, Kowalski I don't want you to die!!

Kowalski: it's ok private... I know you'll make a fine soldier one day, just don't let anyone get in your way, and don't forget me you rascal....

Private couldn't stop crying, knowing that Kowalski had mere minutos left, private was happy he sinabi that to him.

Kowalski: skipper..(wheeze,wheeze), I just want you to know(wheeze,wheeze), its been an honor to serve with you....you will always be a great leader..don't forget about me ok?(wheeze,wheeze)....

Skipper: I won't forget Kowalski, I won't.(crying)

Kowalski: I.....love...you....both.....(wheeze,wheeze)

And then he drew his last breath, and his head fell slowly, then he stopped moving....Kowalski was dead...he was dead because of blowhole...I watched another one of my mga kaibigan die in front of my eyes again... I'll never forget what he sinabi to me, I pag-ibig you to Kowalski... I'll never forget you, and I will make sure that the son of a asong babae gets what he deserves, I'll make him pay for what he did to you and Rico, I swear on my life!

End of chapter 5......

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BOLTravolta god...........

peacebaby7 Aw. :( This is so sad! I feel really bad for all of them. DX And about the novel format; I meant that instead of, for example, [i]Blowhole: Actually, I have a better idea, an idea that I like a whole lot better...Minion, go get my favorite weapon.[/i] it would read a little better if it were written along the lines of, [i]"Actually, I have a better idea, an idea that I like a whole lot better...Minion, go get my favorite weapon," Blowhole ordered his minion.[/i] And if one were speaking through sobs or wheezes such as Kowalski, you could just add in something like, [i]Kowalski spoke between sobs.[/i] before putting in the dialogue. Otherwise, this chapter was very well put and I enjoyed it, despite its sadness. Keep up the good work! :D

spmana123 Thank you, and sorry I'm so used to that format, lol. It was really hard to write this chapter, I even started to cry when I was done, and the pictures were upsetting to me too

peacebaby7 ^You're welcome, and don't worry about the format. And you really don't have to change it if you don't want to, I'm only giving suggestions. The storyline is still good, regardless. :) And I agree, it's very depressing. But keep it up! Make us cry! Never be afraid to tug at your reader's heartstrings. I'm actually going to be writing one in a few months that I hope will be just as depressing. :D

spmana123 Thanks, and I'll read that fan fic when it comes out

peacebaby7 ^You're welcome. And Lol, thanks. XD

Rainshadow999 Oh life. Was I supposed to be sad during this fanfic, because for some reason I'm happy and not crying…there must be something seriously wrong if me if I can't cry and act sad… Lol, this is a awesome fanfic though.

spmana123 Maybe your crying on the inside, and you can't cry, I cried while writing this chapter

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no madami mr.cuteandcuddly

posted by Marlenelover101

The araw started out like all others. The only excepction was that Private was missing "Kowalski,
options." sinabi Skipper. "Eather Private was kidnapped sa pamamagitan ng Dr.Blowhole or the humans took him." sinabi Kowalski. "I say it was Blowhole." sinabi Skipper. "Maby." repled Kowalski. __________________________________________________

Private woke up in the hosbital. He overheard the doctor say he was sick with a new desise. "He'll be staying here for a while. I think the others are O.K. but you had better bring them in for a check-up." The other penguins were brought in and were found desie free. All but Skipper....

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Play-By-Play Commentary on Blowhole's Revenge

posted by IamAngel624

SPOILERS SPOILERS SPOILERS THROUGHOUT, MOST LIKELY.

I tried my very best not to give away spoilers. But i failed. :(

I am watching Blowhole's Revenge right now, this very moment. :3 Being the first-ever Blowhole fangirl to actually CONFESS her fangirl-ness, I figure I'll give a by-the-minute review. It'll be a casual, somewhat geeky review.

AND AS I MENTIONED THERE MAY BE SPOILERS. SO DON'T READ IF YOU DON'T WANT SPOILERS.

HERE WE GO.

><>

Well, we got the original pamagat screen. The old-school BOMB one. Nostalgic. :P

The pamagat screen is VERY cinematic. Western style. Artsy. And already hilarious....

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The Beginning: Part 5 - New Discoveries

posted by ThatDamnLlama

Editers note: hi. okay, so here is part five. ... i actually don't know what i should say. um, enjoy.

Skipper could barely keep his eyes open. He wanted the confort of his bunk, but he knew he was up this early for a reason.

Rico was also up, but was dozing off again. Johnson was woken up sa pamamagitan ng Skipper, but when he realized how early it was, he swore, threatened Skipper not to wake him up again for another hour, and fell back asleep. Skipper didn't bother to wake up Manfredi after that. Kowalski was sleeping like a baby in his bunk. Skipper didn't want to wake him up because of how peaceful he...

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Pairing probabilities

posted by Tripenguinman

So, what're the chances of our paborito pairings? No matter which is most loved, the possiblity is always important but a crusher. For the sake of the fans, I have put together the likliness of these three pairings: Skilene (Skipper/Marlene), Marski (Kowalski/Marlene), and the new Mico (Rico/Marlene).

Skilene- Though the relationship is shown budding on the TV show, the two are hard to get together. If you look, Skipper shows the most attention and affection to Marlene but comparing their personalities, they just aren't that compatiable. Marlene: Strong-willed, playful, selfless, and independent....

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Phantom of the Opera Part 9

posted by KowalskiTheLich

And so King Julien attempted to organize a late night party. He did manage to throw one on Thursday night, but the party was such a bust (the room was very cramped, there was nothing to eat and King Julien insisted that everyone form a conga line even after several mga hayop made it clear they did not want to). The susunod night, Julien announced that he was going to be throwing a segundo party and the segundo he did so nearly all of the mga hayop that were listening walked away, mumbling about how they would write notes to themselves reminding them not to go. Julien, frantically trying to think of...

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Phantom of the Opera Part 4

posted by KowalskiTheLich

King Julien was sleeping on his ‘royal’ bounce house, snoring loudly. Maurice and Mort were sleeping on the opposite side of the exhibit, which was strange because usually Mort made it a point to sleep at least fairly close to Julien. Obviously, this snoring was not normal.

Julien rolled over and opened his eyes. “Whew, all this nasty stuffy air is not treating me well at all” he said. “Or maybe it was that bowl of lychee nuts I ate during the party yesterday.” He shuddered and rolled over, trying to get comfortable.

As he prodded the bouncy house as though it was suddenly going to...

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Phantom of the Opera Part 1

posted by KowalskiTheLich

It was currently eleven o’clock at night, so Kowalski decided to visit the city and see what there was to see for a bit, as most of the people would either be tahanan or in seedy nightclubs which Kowalski made ever effort to stay away from. Since the other mga hayop would all be sound asleep and Kowalski had no access to any science books or materials since they were all back at the HQ, he didn’t have much else to do. He went down into the sewers since it was quicker and he was less likely to be spotted sa pamamagitan ng a human and set off towards the town.

After a few minutes, Kowalski came upon Rodger’s...

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Flightless Lust: Chapter Sixteen

posted by Cornflak

Rico was nearing Marlene’s habitat when he saw Skipper rushing out of the tunnel.

He didn’t even acknowledge Rico’s presence as the two passed. Lucky for him, for he had feared that his leader would have most likely sinabi something about the doll under his arm. Rico turned back and watched as Skipper disappeared into the night’s shadows. It was a bit strange, but he decided to ignore this. He was tired, anyway, and wanted nothing madami than to lie down with his doll. Therefore, he turned again and marched into Marlene’s tunnel with a smile across his beak.

The otter’s tahanan was dark...

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Flightless Lust: Chapter Eleven

posted by Cornflak

“Rise and shine, men!”

Kowalski flung himself from his bunk and landed in front of his leader with stiff posture. Private, however, took his time, as he normally did. To him, this araw wasn’t anything new.

What mission will Skippa assign us? When are we going to eat? Is Julien going to torment us, today?

These were the very same thoughts that coursed through Private’s noggin’ every other day; whereas, Kowalski had other things in mind.

How can I change, today? How can I make this the best araw of my life? How can I ipakita the team my appreciation for them?

Kowalski was wearing the biggest...

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PENGUINS HAVE A MYSPACE

posted by skipperluvs

Well you guys, i wuz on myspace and found out dat da penguins have 4 myspaces... 1 for all of dem n 3 individual ones (private dont got one cuz he too young) its like sooo awesome! if yall wud like to chek it out yungib here are da iugnay to all of em!!! enjoy peoples!!!

Penguins of Madagascar (all of them) :
link

Skipper:
link

Kowalski:
link

Rico:
link

To me Kowalski's is da awesomest cuz he spent ALOT of time on his, yungib Skippers but his dont got info on it and yungib rico's it has nutin on it really but oh well...dan all together is awesome as well...

KOWALSKI'S MYSPACE RAWWWKKSSS!

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The Crew's Secret part 1 kowalski's Plan

posted by monsy38

[Skipper and Kowalski were locked in an intense game of checkers. Both of the opponents were equally matched. Kowalski was, of course, a genius but Skipper hadn’t made it this far with cheap strategy skills either. Skipper moves his black checker piece, it seemed like a good ilipat to him. He realized that it was the wrong ilipat though, when he heard Kowalski’s laugh of triumph.]
Kowalski: [Smugly] And now it’s time to put my triple flip checker trick to the test
[Kowalski does a series of moves with his red checker piece that were as complex and impossible looking as would be expected...

Marlene Collage!

added by Kowalski355

Source: MEEEEEE

Behind The Lines

posted by TheRatKing1

Author's note: yes, i realize this story may be far-fetched, but this was one of my best ideas at the time, and i'm happy with the way it turned out despite my having no knowledge of how the actual voice actors act in real life, nor how they'd behave in a situation like this. This is my version of them, and my take on the show. I'm just here to tell my stories and do my own thing. if you don't like it, shaddap and don't say nuthin'. but if you like it, sa pamamagitan ng all means, comment! I hope you enjoy this!

-Adam (AKA @NumismatistNut on twitter)

Tom McGrath's Point of view (Skipper's voice actor, in case...

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Öhm...!? Pfui!?

added by Sassl

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Poor Skipper vol.2

added by BloodyAlexy

Operation: Skilene- Chapter 12: Busted

posted by peacebaby7

“Busted”
June 23, 2014

    After a long araw of training, dealing with Julien, and protecting the zoo, Skipper busied himself on a top-secret solo mission. . . .

    “You think you’re smooth, Hans, but you’re not as smooth as me. Especially not like . . . this!” Skipper sinabi to the mirror as he held the fake mustache to his beak. He straightened his cowboy hat and shined his sheriff badge. “Now, that’s what I call a rugged Belvidere if I do say so myself.”

    Skipper turned at different angles to the mirror as he admired...

Operation: Challenge— Prompt 35: Breathe Again 04.10.16

posted by peacebaby7

Breathe Again 04.10.16

“Thanks for this, guys. I really appreciate it,” Max sinabi as the penguins prepared to leave.

“No problem, Moon Cat,” Skipper replied. “We hope your new tahanan works for you. You know where to find us if you need anything.”

“Just across town,” Max replied affirmatively. “Got it.”

“Let’s head home, boys,” Skipper sinabi as the four of them climbed into their kulay-rosas car. Rico pressed on the gas but had to brake suddenly when a van zipped by, heading east.

“Whoa, they’re in a hurry,” Private observed.

“Wasn’t that a news van, Skipper?” Kowalski inquired....

Mad Brother Chapter Ten

posted by Mother-of-PoM

Razor padded down the stairs and stared at the young penguin. "Hmm." He lifted him on his back and walked off.

Memory

Private ran around on the burol giggling joyfully.

"Private could you come here for a second?" Blue called, shaking his head at the smaller.

Private squealed then ran back and wrapped his flippers around him. "You're warm big brothah."

"Close your eyes."

"Why?"

Blue laughed, "Well it won't be a surprise if I tell you."

Private pouted but shut his eyes. He was certainly surprised feeling his forehead being kissed.

"May you be smiled upon baby brother."

Private opened his eyes. "What was...

Mad Brother Chapter Five

posted by Mother-of-PoM

"Is he still in there?" Private asked, pacing in front of the door.

"...ve you Ami." Blue's voice sounded from behind the door.

"You too Blue kins." Ami's voice was next.

Private made a face.

Kiki walked into the main room, "There you are Private!" He came closer to the small bird. "Didn't your brother tell you to stay away from this door?"

Private didn't answer, instead he glared at the door. Kiki raised his brow then put his ear to the door. A few segundos later, he scowled.

"Has a kid to take care of and NOW romance is madami important?" Kiki raced off to his room.

He ripped off the kuwintas he was...

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