Penguins of Madagascar Article: Tortured...chapter 5

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posted by spmana123

I was awaiting his decision I had wanted to make to save my two mga kaibigan and get then out of this hell hole, and make them not suffer anymore, but then blowhole had that grin on that face that made me cringe, I knew what was about to happen.

Blowhole:actually I have a better idea, and idea that I like a whole lot better...minion, go get my paborito weapon.

The minion then smiled at all of us, that terrible grin on. There faces were bothering me, god, why can't they leave us alone, haven't we suffered enough. The minion stopped smiling and ran out of the room to go get this "special weapon"

Blowhole: well, I didn't like your plan skipper, but you'll pag-ibig me for this susunod idea up my fin.

Skipper:......

Blowhole: what, got nothing to say.. You will in a minute.

I had nothing to say to this bastard...he was a cold hearted monster, who just wants to do this for the fun of it...was killing my friend FUN to him, was choking Kowalski fun, or beating private with a bat FUN, no... He was going crazy. The minion then came running back in, with a suitcase? He proceeded to pull out a needle with something inside of it.

Blowhole: this, my fellow penguins, is a needle containing my very own substance that can kill anyone when injected in 5 minutes! But... I only have one, so who to use it on?

He then began to look at all of us, one sa pamamagitan ng one he was studying us, that son of a bitch...I wasn't going to let another one of my comrades die!!

Skipper: take me you monster, don't you touch them!!

Blowhole looked at me as if he didn't want to hurt me, maybe he was saving me for last, that's probably why I haven't gotten hurt yet...

Blowhole: I know who I'm picking!

He then began to laugh uncontrollably, then whispered into his minions ear. Who was it?!

The minion grabbed the needle and walked over to Kowalski slowly.. Kowalski then began to cry uncontrollably out of nowhere, screaming them to stop, and why they were doing this to us, why they were laughing it up.

Kowalski: PLEASE!! I'LL DO ANYTHING JUST DON'T KILL ME, PlEASE!!!

Skipper: DON'T HURT HIM, UGAHHH!!!!

I tried to get out of these ropes... But they were so damn tight..I couldn't get out of them, I began to feel blood come down my arms, I didn't even realize I was bleeding from all the for e I was putting on this rope.private couldn't even look anymore, all I could hear from him was crying.

Blowhole: any last words Kowalski.

Kowalski: (sobs) please....don't do this (sobs), I'm sorry for whatever I've done to you, just don't kill me!

Kowalski began to struggle to get out of his chair, but the rope was to strong on him as we'll, all he could do was accept what was about to happen to him,

Blowhole: alright, inject him!

The minion Kowalski's good arm and injected the needle in him.

Skipper:NOOOO!!! YOU BASTARD!!! I'LL KILL YOU!!

Blowhole: alright, come minion, well wait till he dies, then well deal with the other two...

And with that they left and waited for Kowalski to die from the shot they gave him, all I could do was look at Kowalski the entire time, thinking that they tricked us, and this was all a sick joke... But I could even tell that Kowalski was dying..

Kowalski: skipper.....I'm not doing good...am I.... Gonna die...?(cough,cough!)

I began to bawl in tears when he sinabi that, I didn't know what to say to him, we only had a few minutos together before he died, all I could do was cry, just like Rico... I'll never see Kowalski ever again, I'll never hear his ideas about how to get closer to Dorris, or make some of his inventions that no one ever thought of but him...

Skipper: Kowalski (crying), I pag-ibig you man....I pag-ibig you.

Thats all i could say to him,I didn't want to tell him he was going to die, I just wanted to talk to him.

Kowalski: I (cough,cough) pag-ibig you too skipper.....and I pag-ibig private too..... I know....you two....will make it out of here......make sure.....to murder blowhole for me......(cough,cough)

Private: no, Kowalski I don't want you to die!!

Kowalski: it's ok private... I know you'll make a fine soldier one day, just don't let anyone get in your way, and don't forget me you rascal....

Private couldn't stop crying, knowing that Kowalski had mere minutos left, private was happy he sinabi that to him.

Kowalski: skipper..(wheeze,wheeze), I just want you to know(wheeze,wheeze), its been an honor to serve with you....you will always be a great leader..don't forget about me ok?(wheeze,wheeze)....

Skipper: I won't forget Kowalski, I won't.(crying)

Kowalski: I.....love...you....both.....(wheeze,wheeze)

And then he drew his last breath, and his head fell slowly, then he stopped moving....Kowalski was dead...he was dead because of blowhole...I watched another one of my mga kaibigan die in front of my eyes again... I'll never forget what he sinabi to me, I pag-ibig you to Kowalski... I'll never forget you, and I will make sure that the son of a asong babae gets what he deserves, I'll make him pay for what he did to you and Rico, I swear on my life!

End of chapter 5......

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peacebaby7 Aw. :( This is so sad! I feel really bad for all of them. DX And about the novel format; I meant that instead of, for example, [i]Blowhole: Actually, I have a better idea, an idea that I like a whole lot better...Minion, go get my favorite weapon.[/i] it would read a little better if it were written along the lines of, [i]"Actually, I have a better idea, an idea that I like a whole lot better...Minion, go get my favorite weapon," Blowhole ordered his minion.[/i] And if one were speaking through sobs or wheezes such as Kowalski, you could just add in something like, [i]Kowalski spoke between sobs.[/i] before putting in the dialogue. Otherwise, this chapter was very well put and I enjoyed it, despite its sadness. Keep up the good work! :D

spmana123 Thank you, and sorry I'm so used to that format, lol. It was really hard to write this chapter, I even started to cry when I was done, and the pictures were upsetting to me too

peacebaby7 ^You're welcome, and don't worry about the format. And you really don't have to change it if you don't want to, I'm only giving suggestions. The storyline is still good, regardless. :) And I agree, it's very depressing. But keep it up! Make us cry! Never be afraid to tug at your reader's heartstrings. I'm actually going to be writing one in a few months that I hope will be just as depressing. :D

spmana123 Thanks, and I'll read that fan fic when it comes out

peacebaby7 ^You're welcome. And Lol, thanks. XD

Rainshadow999 Oh life. Was I supposed to be sad during this fanfic, because for some reason I'm happy and not crying…there must be something seriously wrong if me if I can't cry and act sad… Lol, this is a awesome fanfic though.

spmana123 Maybe your crying on the inside, and you can't cry, I cried while writing this chapter

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Operation: Challenge— Prompt 3: Light 01.23.15

posted by peacebaby7

Light 01.23.15

Marlene laid against the dark, damp soil, nearly losing consciousness. The air was growing heavy, and her breathing was becoming labored. She'd been underground for almost an oras now, and was running out of oxygen. In the pitch black, she'd never felt madami alone.

She and Private had left the zoo for snowcones. But when they got close, a human spotted them and they had to hide in a panic haste. Private sought refuge in a trashcan while Marlene kalapati into an abandoned soro hole. But the susunod thing she knew, the human ran across it in paghahanap of her and the vibration caused the loose...

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Many madami Miles To Walk (6) Welcome Back!

posted by peacebaby7

“No, Mort! You are so stupid-y! You can not just hop right in front of me like that when I am shaking my money-maker!” Julien snapped at the small lemur.

“But I wanted to shake my money-maker, too!” Mort protested.

“No! You do not have a money-maker! Only the king has the maker of the money,” Julien insisted as he dusted off his crown. “Also, I—”

“King Julien!” Maurice interrupted from the sidelines.

“Maurice!” Julien sinabi angrily. “How dare you interrupt me when I am ranting!”

“Just look!” Maurice sinabi pointing to the penguins’ habitat across the way.

Julien followed...

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Many madami Miles To Walk: (1) Dead Inside

posted by peacebaby7

“Hurry! Get him on the table! We’re losing him!” Kowalski commanded as he, Rico, and Private carried their leader into the zoo infirmary.

Rico and Private laid a bruised, scratched-up, and unconscious Skipper on the examination table.

“We’re going to need help!” Kowalski sinabi setting to work assessing his wounds. “Private, go find some hands!”

“Aye!” Private acknowledged as he leapt from the table. He ran to the chimps’ habitat first.

“Mason! Phil!” he called in a panic.

Mason climbed down from his puno with Phil following close behind.

“What’s the trouble, Private?...

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A lot of character

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Private

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Skipper

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Kowalski

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I Work Alone (4. NPTA)

posted by Aquade

Author's Note: Happy New Year! Here's the susunod chapter!

For the segundo time that day, I woke up –this time with the smell of sardines. Private’s face was hovering close by, and that was the first thing I saw. “He’s awake!” Private yelled.

I held a flipper to my head and groaned. “Remind me not to spin my head like that again,” I said.

Rico smiled at me. He sinabi something I didn’t understand. “Sorry,” I said. “What did you say?”

Private translated. “He says that you’ll get well soon.”

I glanced at Rico. He nodded in confirmation. Kowalski waddled over. “Perhaps...

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Feathery mga kaibigan Chapter Two

posted by Aquade

Monday
The three penguins lined up in front of their leader. “Mission, sir?” asked Kowalski, saluting.
“Right,” replied his commander. “Years ago, I received a call of help from our cousins the turkeys.”
“The turkeys are our cousins?” repeated Private.
“Yes.”
Private’s face grew worried. “So our cousins are being butchered as we speak?”
Rico’s face, on the other hand, was disturbingly dreamy. Ignoring the look on Rico’s face, Skipper continued. “Like a fool, I turned it down.”
“Isn’t it breaking the ibong dagat code?” asked Kowalski.
Skipper glared at him....

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A Family Is Formed (Part 1): (14) Help

posted by peacebaby7

For a long while, Kowalski traveled in the dark. The only way he could see anything was because of the gentle moonlight and Aurora Borealis dancing across the sky. He persisted through the snow, fighting against the wind. The cold pinched at his face and made it difficult to keep his eyes open. Finally, he assumed that it’d be best to just stop and get some rest.

Without much option on a place to sleep, he just stopped where he was and laid his spare glab down. Feet first, he climbed inside the glab until his head was inside. The insulated...

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The bully.....chapter 1

posted by spmana123

It was a typical araw in the zoo....skipper and the others were enjoying there araw so far....private was trying to be extra cute today to ipakita skipper he could be madami cute then he ever could before....

Private: am I Bieng EXTRA cute today skipper?

Skipper:"sigh" yes private...we all know your the cutest....

Rico and kowalski just sighed as they were waving to the people....

Ding...ding.....the kampanilya had rung...it was closing time..the penguins all did thier final wave as the customers left....they all were just about to go down to thier lair and call it a day...when Marlene jumped into thier lair....with...

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tagahanga fiction: Arlene

posted by Flummy

I've written that story a longer time nakaraan and I am from Germany so the story is German. I can't speak or write English well enough to translate it.
I hope some of you can read a little German.

Es war ein sonniger Tag, die Pinguine schlürften ihren Fischsud und Marlene sonnte sich auf ihrem Felsen. King Julien beschwerte sich mal wieder über yungib ilas na manliligaw von Maurice. Alice sprach durch ihr Handy mit einem Lieferanten, der gerade einen LKW Richtung Central Park Zoo steuerte. Ein neues Tier sollte in yungib Zoo kommen. Die Pinguine hörten mit und redeten darüber, dass es eine Unverschämtheit...

Surviving high school...chapter 2

posted by spmana123

It was lunchtime....private went to his locker and grabbed his lunch and went to the cafeteria....he opened the door and saw 100s of mga hayop eating lunch...he was nervous..he had no one to sit with...he slowly walked inside and looked around for that ibong dagat who helped him in the hallway earlier... Kowalski was it..? But had no luck...he decided to sit down all sa pamamagitan ng himself....he opened up his Baggie of isda and begun to eat... Suddenly out of nowhere....a young ibong dagat came up and sat with him...,he looked a little taller then private...

??: do you want me to sit with you...?

Private looked up...

the ibong dagat pag-ibig chronicles, part 2

posted by optionsguy

skipper couldn't help but feel akward at the movies, so instead of focusing on marlene, his date, he focused on everyone elses, Kowalski and doris were admiring the gadgets on screen "hmmm, that's a genius idea, freeze sinag opera glasses, I must try that" "oh don't be so modest Kowalski, your isda jetpack could trump that" "doris that's very flattering....", private and Angelina, a skinny pigeon with Brooklyn accent (weird, skipper had never thought private would get an american girlfriend) were spotting every single land mark in the background of the movie, "and that's big ben, tower bridge,...

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A Family Is Formed (Part 1): (4) Manhattan Meeting

posted by peacebaby7

Author's Note: I was planning on publishing a chapter every four days, but I'm unsure when and if I'll be on tomorrow. So, I decided to post this today. However, the rest of the chapters will remain on schedule.

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The week had finally passed. Days seemed to go sa pamamagitan ng longer for some reason. Lorrie had Kowalski in a small cage and was carrying him to the boat. Preston was coming with her as far as Manhattan, then he was going back to Antarctica. Once they boarded, Preston led her to her cabin as he carried her luggage. The sun was shining brightly over the horizon...

Live Without pag-ibig Chp 3 part 3: Death Solves all Problems

posted by skipperahmad

*Few years later, The Danish army with Skipper got many victory in the battle of New World... he never thought he will be there to celebrate the victory knowing if his past really un-supported... that was changed his life. But time sa pamamagitan ng time, Skipper started to forget his old best friend, Manfredi Ivan and Johnson Davis and all of them finally united again in one mission... but everything you took in the morning must be back in the night. But then, un-strange man will bring Skipper's relativity died one sa pamamagitan ng one... his bestfriends, his teacher, his leader... soon. And his past will be back once...

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How the Penguins Might of Met Chapt. 2: Kowalski

posted by Number1SkippFan

Remember, in this chapter, Kowalski is a little chick, enjoy! :D
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The scientist returned to his lab in the U.S.A. and was planning to study Kowalski.

"I'll start on you later" he sinabi leaving his lab for the night.

Kowalski sat there, in a cage, in the dark, and not in Antarctica. Like any child, he was frightened. He thought of his parents, his brothers and mga kaibigan back at home, well, his parents and mga kaibigan were back home.

He was bored, he saw some books about science and math, and tried his best to reach them.

He tried to get out of his cage, but that hurt because...

Operation: Family, part 8

posted by queenpalm

The penguins stepped into the moonlight. The mga lobo howled. Ru screamed, but Urka covered her beak.
"Where is it?" Urka asked.
"Follow us," Rica said.
The penguins got across the brook and scaled a tree. They made their way over the treetops. Kowalski fell 3 times, and Ru had to pull him back up.
"Here it is," Rica said. They looked down on the ground, and there was the blue light, it seemed to be coming out of nowhere.
"Is it safe?" Urka asked.
"Um, yah, du!" Kowalski said, very unsurely.
Just then, a series of howling startled them. A large pack of mga lobo walked through the trees. Their growling...

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Operation: Family, part one

posted by queenpalm

This is just a little something I decided to write for mother's day. I should be finishing it, but don't count on it.

As always, Skipper called Father's araw a araw off. It wasn't his fault he had to, it was Rico's. He would always stay in his bunk on that holiday. To the other's, it was a good time to take a araw off. It was their opertunity to visit family or just have a free day.
This Father's araw was different, though. It was Johnson's first taon back, and no one was going out anywhere. Ivy and Private were simply going to write a letter to Uncle Nigel, with Johnson's help. Skipper and Kowalski...