Penguins of Madagascar Article: Tortured...chapter 5

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posted by spmana123

I was awaiting his decision I had wanted to make to save my two mga kaibigan and get then out of this hell hole, and make them not suffer anymore, but then blowhole had that grin on that face that made me cringe, I knew what was about to happen.

Blowhole:actually I have a better idea, and idea that I like a whole lot better...minion, go get my paborito weapon.

The minion then smiled at all of us, that terrible grin on. There faces were bothering me, god, why can't they leave us alone, haven't we suffered enough. The minion stopped smiling and ran out of the room to go get this "special weapon"

Blowhole: well, I didn't like your plan skipper, but you'll pag-ibig me for this susunod idea up my fin.

Skipper:......

Blowhole: what, got nothing to say.. You will in a minute.

I had nothing to say to this bastard...he was a cold hearted monster, who just wants to do this for the fun of it...was killing my friend FUN to him, was choking Kowalski fun, or beating private with a bat FUN, no... He was going crazy. The minion then came running back in, with a suitcase? He proceeded to pull out a needle with something inside of it.

Blowhole: this, my fellow penguins, is a needle containing my very own substance that can kill anyone when injected in 5 minutes! But... I only have one, so who to use it on?

He then began to look at all of us, one sa pamamagitan ng one he was studying us, that son of a bitch...I wasn't going to let another one of my comrades die!!

Skipper: take me you monster, don't you touch them!!

Blowhole looked at me as if he didn't want to hurt me, maybe he was saving me for last, that's probably why I haven't gotten hurt yet...

Blowhole: I know who I'm picking!

He then began to laugh uncontrollably, then whispered into his minions ear. Who was it?!

The minion grabbed the needle and walked over to Kowalski slowly.. Kowalski then began to cry uncontrollably out of nowhere, screaming them to stop, and why they were doing this to us, why they were laughing it up.

Kowalski: PLEASE!! I'LL DO ANYTHING JUST DON'T KILL ME, PlEASE!!!

Skipper: DON'T HURT HIM, UGAHHH!!!!

I tried to get out of these ropes... But they were so damn tight..I couldn't get out of them, I began to feel blood come down my arms, I didn't even realize I was bleeding from all the for e I was putting on this rope.private couldn't even look anymore, all I could hear from him was crying.

Blowhole: any last words Kowalski.

Kowalski: (sobs) please....don't do this (sobs), I'm sorry for whatever I've done to you, just don't kill me!

Kowalski began to struggle to get out of his chair, but the rope was to strong on him as we'll, all he could do was accept what was about to happen to him,

Blowhole: alright, inject him!

The minion Kowalski's good arm and injected the needle in him.

Skipper:NOOOO!!! YOU BASTARD!!! I'LL KILL YOU!!

Blowhole: alright, come minion, well wait till he dies, then well deal with the other two...

And with that they left and waited for Kowalski to die from the shot they gave him, all I could do was look at Kowalski the entire time, thinking that they tricked us, and this was all a sick joke... But I could even tell that Kowalski was dying..

Kowalski: skipper.....I'm not doing good...am I.... Gonna die...?(cough,cough!)

I began to bawl in tears when he sinabi that, I didn't know what to say to him, we only had a few minutos together before he died, all I could do was cry, just like Rico... I'll never see Kowalski ever again, I'll never hear his ideas about how to get closer to Dorris, or make some of his inventions that no one ever thought of but him...

Skipper: Kowalski (crying), I pag-ibig you man....I pag-ibig you.

Thats all i could say to him,I didn't want to tell him he was going to die, I just wanted to talk to him.

Kowalski: I (cough,cough) pag-ibig you too skipper.....and I pag-ibig private too..... I know....you two....will make it out of here......make sure.....to murder blowhole for me......(cough,cough)

Private: no, Kowalski I don't want you to die!!

Kowalski: it's ok private... I know you'll make a fine soldier one day, just don't let anyone get in your way, and don't forget me you rascal....

Private couldn't stop crying, knowing that Kowalski had mere minutos left, private was happy he sinabi that to him.

Kowalski: skipper..(wheeze,wheeze), I just want you to know(wheeze,wheeze), its been an honor to serve with you....you will always be a great leader..don't forget about me ok?(wheeze,wheeze)....

Skipper: I won't forget Kowalski, I won't.(crying)

Kowalski: I.....love...you....both.....(wheeze,wheeze)

And then he drew his last breath, and his head fell slowly, then he stopped moving....Kowalski was dead...he was dead because of blowhole...I watched another one of my mga kaibigan die in front of my eyes again... I'll never forget what he sinabi to me, I pag-ibig you to Kowalski... I'll never forget you, and I will make sure that the son of a asong babae gets what he deserves, I'll make him pay for what he did to you and Rico, I swear on my life!

End of chapter 5......

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peacebaby7 Aw. :( This is so sad! I feel really bad for all of them. DX And about the novel format; I meant that instead of, for example, [i]Blowhole: Actually, I have a better idea, an idea that I like a whole lot better...Minion, go get my favorite weapon.[/i] it would read a little better if it were written along the lines of, [i]"Actually, I have a better idea, an idea that I like a whole lot better...Minion, go get my favorite weapon," Blowhole ordered his minion.[/i] And if one were speaking through sobs or wheezes such as Kowalski, you could just add in something like, [i]Kowalski spoke between sobs.[/i] before putting in the dialogue. Otherwise, this chapter was very well put and I enjoyed it, despite its sadness. Keep up the good work! :D

spmana123 Thank you, and sorry I'm so used to that format, lol. It was really hard to write this chapter, I even started to cry when I was done, and the pictures were upsetting to me too

peacebaby7 ^You're welcome, and don't worry about the format. And you really don't have to change it if you don't want to, I'm only giving suggestions. The storyline is still good, regardless. :) And I agree, it's very depressing. But keep it up! Make us cry! Never be afraid to tug at your reader's heartstrings. I'm actually going to be writing one in a few months that I hope will be just as depressing. :D

spmana123 Thanks, and I'll read that fan fic when it comes out

peacebaby7 ^You're welcome. And Lol, thanks. XD

Rainshadow999 Oh life. Was I supposed to be sad during this fanfic, because for some reason I'm happy and not crying…there must be something seriously wrong if me if I can't cry and act sad… Lol, this is a awesome fanfic though.

spmana123 Maybe your crying on the inside, and you can't cry, I cried while writing this chapter

The Antarctic Mission: Scene 20

posted by peacebaby7

Underground Lair

Skipper: "Um...It's not working..."

Blowhole: "You think I don't know that!" *presses button frantically*

"I think your little contraption will be a little hard to operate without these!"

Blowhole: "Hey! Grab him! Get those wires!"

Skipper: *jumps out of chair & heads toward Kowalski & Rico to untie them* Thank you for that long flashback Blowhole! Gave me just enough time to get the ropes around my flippers untied...

Minions: *tries to stop them, but Skipper & Private take them out*

Skipper: "I was beginning to think you weren't going to follow through with that little...

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The Antarctic Mission: Scene 13

posted by peacebaby7

Antarctica

*the foursome are waddling along the nagyelo desert, well one of them is limping*

Skipper: "So...Private. How did you come to find out about this bangka thingy?"

Private: "While I was waddling along, & I saw it there. Humans got in it, & it just started moving away."

Skipper: "If it started moving away, wouldn't that mean it isn't there anymore?"

Private: "Oh, it was at night when I witnessed this. The susunod morning, another bangka was there."

Skipper: "So...It's a reoccurring thing then?"

Private: "I suppose. I don't see any other explanation."

Skipper: "Whatever you say..." Something...

The Antarctic Mission: Scene 12

posted by peacebaby7

Underground Lair

Blowhole: "OK, Private. Here's the plan. I've been spying on Skipper for 2 years now. He'll be strong. He's gonna be smart. You, however, look just sweet and innocent enough to trick him into following you. Understand?"

Private: "Yes, but, how do I do that?"

Blowhole: "You'll figure it out when you see them."

Private: "What does he look like?"

Blowhole: *shows him picture* "This is who your looking for. He will be with 2 other penguins. I don't care if they come too. I can find something to do with them."

Private: "Aye."

Blowhole: "It's time. Bring them to me. Do not fail."

Private:...

The Antarctic Mission: Scene 6

posted by peacebaby7

Antarctica

Kowalski: *awakens & sees darkness, then waddling over to Rico* "Rico, wake up!"

Rico: "Wha?" *slowly awakens*

Kowalski: "It's night. But we have a problem. There are too many clouds. I can't see any stars."

Rico: "What are we gonna do?"

Kowalski: "I dunno. I can't wait here for the stars to come out...I'm just too hungry."

Rico: "Yeah. Same here. So what do we do then?"

Kowalski: "I suggest we begin walking. Maybe we can find some food."

*Kowalski & Rico waddle till they find a small opening in the ice*

Kowalski: "Here! Maybe we can find some fish. But stay close to the surface where...

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An Interview with Skipper...

posted by peacebaby7

Interview Starting in

3...

2...

1...

Me: "So, Skipper, how long have you been in the military?"

Skipper: "Classified."

Me: "O...K. Um, what are some problems you have to deal with on daily basis?"

Skipper: "Classified."

Me: T_T "OK, um, how do your men view you as a leader?"

Skipper: "Classified."

Me: ',: l *sigh* "Who's your susunod in command?"

Skipper: "Classified."

Me: "Where did you go on your first mission?!"

Skipper: "Classified."

Me: >:( "What do you eat for breakfast?!"

Skipper: "Classified."

Me: "IS THERE ANY tanong YOU WILL ANSWER?!"

Skipper: "Classified."

Me: T_T

Tip: If you want to interview a military operative...don't waste your breath.

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WARNING!

posted by peacebaby7

SIDE EFFECTS OF WATCHING THE PENGUINS OF MADAGASCAR MAY INCLUDE:

--Your eyes may explode from too much awesomeness

--You may become so obsessed with the ipakita you will dedicate your whole life to it

--You may become a sofa spud because you will watch the ipakita nonstop for literally 24/7

--You may form your own commando team & put yourself & others in mortifying danger

--You may cause yourself to never speak again because you will try to be like Rico

--Your house may explode because you will try to make inventions like Kowalski

--Strained eyes because you will be watching the ipakita with tape holding up your eyelids so you don't miss a thing

Hospitals worldwide & Insurance agencies worldwide are not responsible for any of these occurances.

Apartments Menagerie Chapter One: Introductions

posted by JediPenguin16

In the puso of Manhattan, near Central Park, is a strange apartment complex. It is made of brick, a century old, and placed between two shiny skyscrapers. The windows all have black bars, the twenty-three stories are all crooked and there is the newest addition of a Madagascar Baobab puno on the roof. The entrance was an arched brick gate way, atop which was an iron sign.

“ Apartments Menagerie. Weird name, but I do like the walang tiyak na layunin old clock. It’s a nice touch. ” The young woman sinabi to herself. She waited several moments before entering, before taking a deep breath

“ Confidence, Marlene....

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Okarah's Secret: Earth

posted by RockOnPenguin

Quick message: I wrote a prologue for this a while back, and now i'm finally gonna continue it! ^^ Enjoy!

Skipper and Marlene strolled sa pamamagitan ng until they found a sign in front of the entrance of a forest.
Skipper: "Here lies the forest of Earth's End. A temple to you it will send."
Marlene: What the heck could that mean?
Skipper: I don't know, but I know a cheesy riddle when I see one. Let's see what we can find in the forest.
Marlene and Skipper entered the dark Forest. They followed a path and suddenly it ended.
Marlene: Where should we go now?
Skipper: Hmm.....
Skipper looked around and found a lever...

The Penguins' Past: Chapter One - A Forgotten Past

posted by KowalskiRocks

*Please note that Melody is my OC and that is the only reason I'm adding her. And also if this story sucks,(and it most likely will, as I'm not a very good writer)please tell me how I can improve it.*

It started as any other day. Skipper was training his crew as usual, but then a huge bird-like thing swooped straight at them! It landed a few meters away from the habitat, and at that point they could see that it wasn't a walang tiyak na layunin object at all: it was a beautiful young penguin!
S: Is that a flying penguin?
K: It would seem so, but penguins can't fly!
P: Skipper, is it just me, or does that penguin...

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Solitude.

posted by CuteCuddly

The light was dim as Kowalski worked in his lab. Normally he wouldn’t be working in such a dim light, but today he didn’t notice the fact it could damage his eyes. Pouring chemicals into test tubes was his life’s work. There was nothing else he could do. Ever since he was a chick, he would sit alone, working on experiments.

But sometimes, he had felt lonely.

Not that he could help it; he didn’t know how to socialize then. Whenever he tried to make friends, he would start sa pamamagitan ng saying something to do with math, or science. Other chicks would stare at him and walk off laughing.

He never met...

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What do You do?

posted by CuteCuddly

When you’re depressed, what do you do?

I look for help in many places, but I don’t always find it. So what do you do?

Sure, Kowalski’s science is helpful, but I don’t always understand it.
Sure, Rico’s regurgitation is useful, but I don’t always need it.
Sure, Private’s sweet view of life is encouraging, but I don’t always believe it.

So when you’re depressed, what do you do?

I keep looking.

Sure, Maurice’s serving is loyal, but that doesn’t always help me.
Sure, Sad-Eyes’ foot hugging is amusing, but I don’t always like it.
Sure, Ring-Tail’s partying is annoying, but I don’t...

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Till The Night Ends Chapter 5 O.O

posted by sweetyKneul

uy everyone! I have updated :O
Hope you like it ;)

They were still in the first level!
The only thing that had happened was that the playing field has been changed!
They were no longer in the jungle but in a nagyelo wasteland!
The beautiful soft green was replaced sa pamamagitan ng an icy white!
And the penguins were in the middle of that!
"Oh man! Do anybody have a tanning kama right here?" Kowalski asked, trembling.
"Oh. Sorry! I have unfortunately forgotten it today!" Skipper shouted sarcastically.
"There!" Rico called, pointing to a flag about 20 yards away.
Rico wanted to run to the flag, but was stopped sa pamamagitan ng Skipper....

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Never the Same (Part 1)

posted by BrightLight92

Okay, this idea came to me in a dream. It's Skilene... Just not a happy one. I would've put this on FF.net, but for some reason, it somehow got a parental block on it. :/
Marlene didn't want to let go. She didn't. She was afraid and worried and she didn't want him to leave.
"Skipper," She grasped tighter into the hug, not caring if her ring clenched uncomfortably tight to her finger. "Don't go. Please, don't go," She tried to keep the tears from her voice. She tried to sound strong, for him and for herself, but her sadness leaked into her voice and her guard went down. She grasped tighter to...

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Mother sa pamamagitan ng Accident chapter 3:the new rules

posted by andresandru

Arlene pulled Marlene back to her habitat, and saw Private and Mandy halik there. These two noticed her presence and blushed as they left their kiss.

"Private" Arlene started "would you be nice and leave?" Mandy changed her blushing to an annoied look.

"hmmm, o-ok. bye Mandy" Private left, not whithout another halik in the cheeck of his lover. He slipped away, and Arlene crushed the newly-made wood door behind her.

"you two are going to know the new rules, and follow them, ok?" Arlene was making a verry serious tone in her voice, Mandy giggled as he asked a verry obvious question.

"why?"

"cause...

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The Arena of Death (Preview)

posted by legendary7

Skipper's point of view:

The bone-chilling hands jerked me up from the ground. Then, I knew it was my turn. As the gritty man carried me, eyes peered out of the pitch black darkness. Some were filled with melchnolly relief and others with despair. For they knew, they could be next. Right, at that moment I remembered the words my father had told me when he had left for war: "Now, that you're a soldier you must never be afraid to die. It is the greatest honor for a soldier to die on the battlefield. Win or don't come back at all." The human hoisted me up to his face level and snickered with his...

Shipwrecked chapter 1

posted by kivamarie

the story begins with skipper ipinapakita me a surprise.

Me: skipper can I open my eyes now?

Skipper: not yet Kiva. okay now

Me: (opens my eyes) wow. it's a boat.

Skipper: yup and for the susunod few days it's just going to be you and me going fishing.

Me: cool I like that idea skipper let's go.

so me and skipper went to Bahia De, Los Angeles and then me and skipper set sail on the bangka passing a few islands to Bahia Kino.

Skipper: so how's the bangka ride so far Kiva?

Me: hm? oh it's good skipper.

Skipper: what's wrong don't you like it?

Me: I do like it skipper it's just that I keep having this funny feeling...

Survival chapter 8

posted by kivamarie

the susunod mourning

???: Kiva.

Me: (wakes up) huh? that voice.

???: Kiva.

Me: a voice must be calling my name (wakes up skipper) skipper wake up.

Skipper: (wakes up) what is it Kiva?

Me: it's a voice it must be calling my name come on.

Skipper: a voice? uy wait up (follows me).

so me and skipper headed to where that voice was coming from.

???: Kiva.

Me: there it is again it's not that far skipper.

Skipper: can you at least slow down for once?

meanwhile

Private: Kiva. Kowalski any luck?

Kowalski: no (seeing something) wait a minuto Private I see something (sees me and skipper coming out) Private it's Kiva...

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I am in the PoM World. Chapter 2

posted by CuteCuddly

Next chappie, hope you enjoy.

It's hard to concentrate when you're being constantly watched over sa pamamagitan ng a flat-headed ibong dagat who is barely taller than you. But I had to, I had no choice. He wouldn't trust me unless he puts me under constant servailance. He has to see if I'm up to anything fishy, ha, no pun intended.

So, awkward silences are always between us. The rest are out doing recon, so I try to make small talk, but he won't talk much. Ok, I understand that he's paranoid, but that doesn't mean he can't comunicate with me, does it?

"So, what kind of isda do you have in your coffee?"
"Classified."...

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Love's Revenge Pt.2

posted by JayJay12

Skipper surprised face when Cream sinabi "yes".

Skipper surprised face when Cream said "yes".

In the HQ...
Skipper:What the...?!Are you sure,soldier?!
Private:Yes!!!
Skipper:Well,let's ask her if she did!
Somewhere in Coney Island...
Hans:Well,what a girl
Marx:Yes,she is beautiful!Well,where is-
Blowhole:I'm here.*laughs evil*
Hans:You are sooooo late
Blowhole:Sorry,one of my alimasag minions had an accident and someone had to clean it up
Marx:Cool segway!
Blowhole:Thanks.Marx,can I do anything for you?
Marx:I need to get rid of the penguins.Permanently.And I mean it
*smiles badly*
Above the HQ...
Cream:The halik was only a dare,Private.What a silly imagination that you have! *smiles*
Private:I feel so...

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Undercover in Paris ... *Chapter 1*

posted by SkippX101

*I have posted this on the Skilene site but i thought its not JUST about Skilene...Hope u lyk!*

A silent figure moved in the darkness,he wore a hoddie dyaket in order to cover his face. He left a note on his bunk, turning around to watch his peaceful unit in a deep sleep. He sighed and turned around, out of the HQ and onto the 'island'. "HEEY Skipper!" A cheery voice sinabi behind him. "SSSHHHH!!!!!!" He sinabi covering Marlene's mouth with his flipper. "Mmh amhhr!!!!!!! Hey! What are you doing???" She sinabi annoyed, pulling his flipper away. "None of your business...What are YOU doing here is the...